Bad Art I Am Compelled To Share

Wednesday, November 02, 2005

Is My Dad On The Bus (Bad Art Poem)

In an effort to put different forms of art on my bad art blog I wrote a poem. Sort of. I wrote this poem the same way I wrote the first poem for this blog. I took the last paragraph from a play, written and used with kind permission by my good friend, The Most Horrible, I then cut the paragraph into different words and phrases. (about 50 pieces in all) I then put all those pieces in a hat and drew out pieces until I had a poem. I promise this was put together randomly. This time though instead of just scanning the cut out words I typed them onto a background. The background is an old picture I made with pastel crayons and then tinkered with in photoshop. The background can be seen in it's almost original form in my piece "Lost". I really like the way this whole thing turned out. Please let me know what you think and please leave some love for me.


  • Dearest Unknown,

    I love bad poetry. It is off key music to my soul. Thank you!



    By Blogger Perriette, at 02:41  

  • This poetry would make a nice SOAP on TEEVEE. Much LOVE.

    By Blogger merlinprincesse, at 04:50  

  • It's weird, but somehow it really works too, doesn't it. Wowzer

    By Blogger JacqueLynn, at 06:28  

  • Leaving you some love today. :)

    By Blogger Jenn, at 07:43  

  • love love and more love!!!!

    By Blogger Burfica, at 11:09  

  • It's a trick! You need new blog named Not So Bad Art - Love you anyway .... Love

    By Blogger Anonymous, at 12:32  

  • fifi: You are sooooo welcome!

    merlinprincesse: That's funny, the script I took this from is about a bunch of SOAP actors. Good eye, good eye.

    jacquelynn: I agree it is strangely wonderful.

    jenn: Finally! Where you been?

    burfica: EEK! A CATBOWLER!

    anonymous: Dogs are sneaky, but not as sneaky as cats. I was thinking of calling it "Sometimes Bad Art But Occasional Glints Of No So Bad Almost Good And Quite Passable Art I Am Compelled To Share".

    By Blogger The Unknown, at 13:22  

  • hmmmmmmm

    leaving you love twice.



    By Blogger Catnapping, at 13:44  

  • Nice creativity here keep it up. I like your borken idea! :)

    By Blogger Pusha V, at 14:27  

  • "Sometimes Bad Art But Occasional Glints Of No So Bad Almost Good And Quite Passable Art I Am Compelled To Share with one VERY good idea" is my suggestion.

    Leaving love thrice.

    By Blogger Anonymous, at 15:06  

  • catnapping: Well, I did say it was bad art. Thanks for the double love.

    pusha v: Thanks. It all comes from my broken head.

    anonymous: OK, wait... what about... "Mostly bad art with a light sprinkle of Atkins friendly crutons that show just the slightest hint of being good art and one really good idea just like a bad art salad with a really snappy dressing."
    Thrice am I loved and thrice I will say thanks to thee oh anonymous one.

    By Blogger The Unknown, at 00:19  

  • Stop grovelling! Love.

    By Blogger Anonymous, at 02:03  

  • anonymous: Grovelling? I was trying to get Shakespearian!
    love to thee. *vomit*

    By Blogger The Unknown, at 00:06  

  • maybe you should stick to drawing.

    By Blogger Jonpaul, at 18:58  

  • jonpaul: Bah! You wouldn't know art if it
    *%#$&# you!

    By Blogger The Unknown, at 01:21  

  • There seems to be a bad case of split personality going on here. Maybe you should check into the WC asylum for a while. Watch out for the shadows, though.

    By Blogger Perriette, at 04:57  

  • Fifi: But, I like to hide in the shadows.

    By Blogger The Unknown, at 13:17  

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