Is My Dad On The Bus (Bad Art Poem)
In an effort to put different forms of art on my bad art blog I wrote a poem. Sort of. I wrote this poem the same way I wrote the first poem for this blog. I took the last paragraph from a play, written and used with kind permission by my good friend, The Most Horrible, I then cut the paragraph into different words and phrases. (about 50 pieces in all) I then put all those pieces in a hat and drew out pieces until I had a poem. I promise this was put together randomly. This time though instead of just scanning the cut out words I typed them onto a background. The background is an old picture I made with pastel crayons and then tinkered with in photoshop. The background can be seen in it's almost original form in my piece "Lost". I really like the way this whole thing turned out. Please let me know what you think and please leave some love for me.
17 Comments:
Dearest Unknown,
I love bad poetry. It is off key music to my soul. Thank you!
Love,
FiFi
By Baroness Von Wolfengeist, at 02:41
This poetry would make a nice SOAP on TEEVEE. Much LOVE.
By merlinprincesse, at 04:50
It's weird, but somehow it really works too, doesn't it. Wowzer
By JacqueLynn, at 06:28
Leaving you some love today. :)
By Jenn, at 07:43
love love and more love!!!!
By Burfica, at 11:09
It's a trick! You need new blog named Not So Bad Art - Love you anyway .... Love
By Anonymous, at 12:32
fifi: You are sooooo welcome!
love
merlinprincesse: That's funny, the script I took this from is about a bunch of SOAP actors. Good eye, good eye.
love
jacquelynn: I agree it is strangely wonderful.
love
jenn: Finally! Where you been?
love
burfica: EEK! A CATBOWLER!
love
anonymous: Dogs are sneaky, but not as sneaky as cats. I was thinking of calling it "Sometimes Bad Art But Occasional Glints Of No So Bad Almost Good And Quite Passable Art I Am Compelled To Share".
love
By The Unknown, at 13:22
hmmmmmmm
leaving you love twice.
love,
cat
love,
cat
By Catnapping, at 13:44
Nice creativity here keep it up. I like your borken idea! :)
By Pusha V, at 14:27
"Sometimes Bad Art But Occasional Glints Of No So Bad Almost Good And Quite Passable Art I Am Compelled To Share with one VERY good idea" is my suggestion.
Leaving love thrice.
Love
Love
Love
By Anonymous, at 15:06
catnapping: Well, I did say it was bad art. Thanks for the double love.
love
pusha v: Thanks. It all comes from my broken head.
love
anonymous: OK, wait... what about... "Mostly bad art with a light sprinkle of Atkins friendly crutons that show just the slightest hint of being good art and one really good idea just like a bad art salad with a really snappy dressing."
Thrice am I loved and thrice I will say thanks to thee oh anonymous one.
thanks
thanks
thanks!
love
By The Unknown, at 00:19
Stop grovelling! Love.
By Anonymous, at 02:03
anonymous: Grovelling? I was trying to get Shakespearian!
love to thee. *vomit*
By The Unknown, at 00:06
maybe you should stick to drawing.
By Jonpaul, at 18:58
jonpaul: Bah! You wouldn't know art if it
*%#$ you!
love
By The Unknown, at 01:21
There seems to be a bad case of split personality going on here. Maybe you should check into the WC asylum for a while. Watch out for the shadows, though.
By Baroness Von Wolfengeist, at 04:57
Fifi: But, I like to hide in the shadows.
love
By The Unknown, at 13:17
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